When two or more sentence units are joined into one by using a FANBOYS conjunction, the conjunction must be preceded by a comma: John went outside, and he played baseball. Textbook: 16:1.D
Adjectives and adverbs that don’t make a significant difference in meaning are wordy and unneeded. Textbook: 18:2.E & following
Avoid using the full formal name of an institution on second reference; use a shortened version, pronoun or synonym instead. Textbook: 17:2.E